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Old 2002-07-02, 04:57 AM   #1
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{ Insert Cartoon Network introducing Justice League here}

(Cartoon Network presents JL in Widescreen)

Scene opens up:: 7 White Mountains appear made of ice,and snow. Inside the mounatins stands a large kingdom made of crystal stands. A girl sits in a room sitting on a chair by the window and leaning on a table.

Snowblaze sat in her chair with her chin rested on her hands and her elbows rested on the table. She was a young female with long blonde hair. Snoeblaze wore a silver mask that covered her eyes and a black and white costume. She had long black gloves and low black boots with white fuzzy tips. SnowBlaze was known as the Guardian of the Crystal Moutains and was Flash's girlfriend before he had to join the Justice League.

But Snowblaze and Flash lost contact afterwards. Plus to make matters worst Flash attempted to see her but he could never find her. When he finally found her, she had turned him away and dismissed him from the Crystal Moutains forever. Flash never returned after that and Snowblaze was now determined to get him back.

"Oh,Flash." sighed Snowblaze staring at the ceiling. The black and white female got up and walked towards the window staring out at the Crystal Mountains.

All of a sudden, a small knock was head on the door. Snowblaze turned her head towards the door and spoke softly.

"Who's there?" asked Snowblaze.

"Me, Siren" said a gentle man voice.

"Come in." said Snowblaze and turned her body completly to face him when he entered.

He slowly walked in and nodded to her.

"How are you,Snowblaze?" asked Siren.

"I'm alright. Did you get the jet ready?" she asked looking out the window.

"It's ready when your ready" said Siren but then coughed a bit.

Snowblaze looked at him,"Is something wrong?"

"Well your going back there to see him only?" asked Siren and then paused.

"Yes, I do look forward to seeing Flash again.I really miss him." said Snowblaze and headed towards the door.

Siren watched her walk past him and step out the door. He quickly faced her and spoke.

"Well,there is something you should know first," said Siren,"Before you go out there."

Snowblaze stopped and turned her head towards him.

"Yes?" she asked.

**********
Flash forward:::

Meanwhile, at the Watch Towers Flash and AngelStar were in the main command room. AngelStar was in her spare costume and had the orignal one on a dummy and was looking it over fixing the cuts on it. Flash sat at the ledge admiring her and trying to make conversation.

Flash smiled at her warmly,"So back on Angelo what was your duties?"

Without looking at him and working n her costume still, AngelStar spoke to him.

"Well, I was known as the Angel Goddess, defender of the Silver Kingdom and the royal future queen." she said politely as she worked.

"Really?" asked Flash,"Well....is there an Angel God.or future king that will share your throne?"

AngelStar finished working and turned to him smiling. She quickly jumped up and sat next to him on the ledge. Flash smiled as she held his right arm.

"Why do you ask?" said AngelStar with a flirty tone.

Flash grinned at her as he looked into her eyes as he leaned towards her and she leaned towards him.

"Just asking...." said Flash and inched closer to her lips,"Because.. a Queen needs..a king..to rule the kingdom..together.." he whispered and was about to kiss her when the sirens went off.

AngelStar and Flash turned towards the screen and AngelStar got up to see what was wrong.

"Blasted! I was in middle of something too." groaned Flash then got up and raced towards the main room with the rest of the Justice League.

********

"Looks like we got company heading towards Earth." said Superman.

"Hm?" What is it this time?" asked Blue Angel,one of AngelStar's loyal defenders.

"Looks like an alien of some kind, but it doesn't seem to be a threat just yet." said Superman.

"We don't have time to wait for "Just Yet" said Batman and walked towards the exit.

The Justice League followed him towards the ship.

Flash jumped in his seat and put his seat belt on.

"So what kind of monster is it this time?" asked Flash.

"We'll see when we get there" said Green Latern.

The ship took off towards Earth's atmoshere.

*********

Meanwhile on Earth Snowblaze took her sword out and slashed at the alien's leg but was pushed back. SnowBlaze fell on her side but quickly got up and slashed at the alien's right leg.
The alien let out a roar of pain then slapped the black and white female towards a building.

The door to the ship of the Justice League opened and Flash quickly raced out and caught the girl. She shook her head then looked at him and smiled. Flash wasn't paying attention to who it was. He just wanted to get her somewhere safe from the alien.

Superman and Hawkgirl flew out and charged towards the alien at full speed, as Green Latern flew down with the ship at his side.

*****

Meanwhile Flash quickly put down the female and then paused.

'"You!" he said with his eyes widen.

"Flash! It's good to see you again." said Snowblaze and hugged him.

"Um..yeah." said Flash and looked at her hug him.

******

Meanwhile,

"This thing can't be stopped!" shouted Blue Angel as he took his sword out from the alien's tail.

"There's always a way." said Superman and started to punch at the alien's face.

Hawkgirl came racing at the alien's head and took a quick swing.

"This isn't going well,is it?" asked John Jon.

"No, but maybe I can try!" said AngelStar and took out a tiny piece of paper and ran towards the alien and slammed it on it's leg."I banish you evil being in the name of the Angels."

The alien roared a but then glared at her. AngelStar took a step back and gasped,"Oh my gosh. My power doesn't work aganist this thing!"

The alien took a swing at her but Batman quickly swooped by and grabbed her. Then both of them landed on the ledge of a building.

"Stay here." said Batman when he put her down and fired his flare gun at another building and joined the others.

AngelStar nodded then looked over her shoulder to her left and saw Flash standing talking with Snowblaze. AngelStar tilted her head a bit and said,"I wonder who she is."

At that moment the building started to shake and AngelStar quickly jumped up and rested her arms at her side then pulled them out again. Magically a pair of beauitful silver wings appeared and AngelStar swooped down and joined Green Latern.

"Where did it come from?" asked AngelStar.

"i'm not sure. But it's getting on my nerves." said Green Latern and fired at it with no effect.

Superman tried to fire at the alien with his eye ray power but there was no effect either.

Batman growled at he thoyght of a way to stop it. "Where the hell is Flash?" asked Batman.

******

At the moment, Flash was talking to Snowblaze when he remembered the monster.

"Listen Snowblaze I need to go." said Flash and raced off.

"But....what about..us." asked Snowblaze and then transformed into a snow leapord and chased after Flash.

The entire Justice League team was getting tired and there was no sign of them winning this battle. But just then Flash appeared and so did Snowblaze in animal form. Snowblaze quickly transformed back and glanced at the alien.

"I'm sorry it was just one of my tricks I was pulling to get Flash's attention." said Snowblaze and made the image disapear.

The entire Justice League, Blue Angel and AngelStar stared in amazement then looked at her.

"Who are you?" asked Green Latern.

"Im Snowblaze,guardian of the Crystal Mountains." she replied and smiled at Flash happily.

AngelStar stood next to HawkGirl and studied Snowblaze a bit. AngelStar was a gentle, warm hearted, carefree soul. She never was quick to make judgement but was curious to know who Snowblaze was.

"Well it's nice to meet you." said Superman,"I'm Superman, this is Batman, Green Latern, John Jon, Hawk Girl, AngelStar and Blue Angel."

Snowblaze glanced at them then stopped when she saw AngelStar then smiledat Superman."It's nice to meet you all." she said with a gentle voice.

Flash raced towards AngelStar's side and put hisarm around her showing his affection.

"Snowblaze, I like you to meet my girlfriend,AngelStar defender of the Slver Kingdom on Angelo." he said quickly,hoping Snowblaze got his point.

"Oh it is a pleasure to meet.....you..AngelStar." said Snowblaze trying to keep a smile on her face. But her eyes had hate written on them when she laid eyes on Flash's new girlfriend. SnowBlaze at first didn't take AngelStar's hand when she offered it, but then quickly snatched it and squeezed AngelStar's fingers and dug her nails into her palm and fingers.

AngelStar felt the pinch of pain and quickly pulled her hand away. Snowblaze manged to pierce her skin a bit with her nails but AngelStar ignoired it and hid it from the others but it caught Batman's eye but he didn't say a word.

******

Later, at the Watch Tower, Snowblaze was shown around by Superman. "This is where we keep an eye on thing on Earth and outer space." said Superman pointing to the screen.

"It's wonderful." said Snowblaze and looked around. Snowblaze was hoping she'd see AngelStar but didn't and smirked. Then Snowblaze saw Flash walk by towards the Kitchen area.

"Well that's it for this room. If you want I can--" began Superman but was interuppted by Snowblaze.

"Thanks but I ned to go talk to Flash." she told him and left.

Superman watched her leave as HawkGirl and Batman approached him.

"I don't like her. Something about her isn't right." said Batman.

HawkGirl and Superman looked at each other then at him waiting for an answer.

*******

Meanwhile inside AngelStar's room, AngelStar was tending to her wound on her palm.

"Oww..Snowblaze really dug into my palm..." whinced Angel as she rubbed a wet cotton ball over the cut. "I wonder who she is."

Then sounds of a conversation could be heard from nearby. AngelStar got up and went to see. AngelStar heard Flash's voice then Snowblaze's coming from the Kitchen. So she decided to see what was up in stealth mode.

AngelStar was what humans would call a "Guardian Angel" meaning she was there to protect you always even if you couldn't see her. AngelStar used this stealth mode power to watch over a friend or an enemy but also if it looked like a situation was too much for her and she needed to get away quickly. AngelStar leaned against the wall outside the Kitchen and listened silently.

"Flash why not just give me the chance..."said Snowblaze,"After all I am still your girlfriend."

Flash put a straw into his drink,"WAS" he corrected her,"You dumped me a long time ago and banished me from the Crystal Mountains remember?"

"Yes but I was wrong. Take me back." said Snowblaze, hugging his back and placing her arms around his waist..

AngelStar's eyes widen as she turned heard this then peeked inside to see what was happening. Flash looked down and moved SnowBlaze's arms away from him then turned to face Snowblaze. AngelStar feared Flash would say,"Yes" or "Alright, let me tell AngelStar we're over." But instead she heard Flash say something else.

"No, I have AngelStar and I"m very happy with her and my friends." said Flash then left the kitchen going towards the maintance room.

AngelStar smiled as she heard Flash and lookedat the stunned Snowblaze then sneaked away in stealth mode still and returned to her room.

Snowblaze's eyes turned red as she took a deep breath. "Grr...you dare you hurt me Flash?!...You choose her over me? I will make you change your mind soon enough!" she hissed."Nobody ever says no to "Snowblaze!"

To Be Contuined...


(Insert ending theme here))
 

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Old 2002-07-04, 07:52 PM   #2
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I think it's meant to be TF fanfic, luv...
 
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Old 2002-07-05, 12:43 AM   #3
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I'm reasonably sure of that too (still waiting on a forum rename to confirm)...I'm also fairly sure this could fit into the Non-TF Cartoons & Comics Forum...

...oh well, I mod both so I can always move it back if needs.
 
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Old 2002-07-06, 05:48 AM   #4
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I think it's meant to be TF fanfic, luv...
My fic was that bad?..
 

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Old 2002-07-06, 01:22 PM   #5
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Nope, it reads well, and if a character shows up who transforms a little more, I'll stick it back in the other forum...just thought that more people would check it out in here since it's more GL-related...
 
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Old 2002-07-07, 12:16 AM   #6
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My fic was that bad?..
Eh? How does that read that I said it was bad?
 
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Old 2002-07-07, 03:16 AM   #7
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Eh? How does that read that I said it was bad?
Well to be honest I been burned alot, told my fans suck and that they are no good. Nobody gives the time to read it or give me a chance. It's just something I've grown to see happen when I post a fic
 

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Old 2002-07-10, 04:26 PM   #8
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How hang on... where did I do any of those things? I merely remakred that it was probably in the wrong forum, and that as far as I knew our fanfic/fanart forum was for Transformers stuff... Jesus Christ...
 
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