[FICTION] generation 1 comic continuation

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Generation 1 comic continuation - now with issue 85

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Hi All,

I'm new to this particular TF forum and so a big hi to everyone. About a year ago I started a project which involved continuing the Marvel TF comic continuity from where it (rather abruptly) left off all those years ago. I'm currently up to my seventh issue of the comic, with many more stories to go.

My sixth issue I collaborated on for the most part with a colourist in order to improve the quality of the comic. Although the colouring was spectacular, it turned out to be a bit too demanding as far as time constarints went for the person n question and so the comic is no longer coloured.

I was hoping that maybe by posting on a new forum I would not only be able to share it with a wider audience but also may attract the attention of someone who fancied a stab at colouring a few frames here and there. (as I have neither the time nor skill to digitally colour the comic as well) Anyway, I'll try to post up the issues over the next few days for you all to have a look at. Let me knw what you think.
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Finally page 12. I tried to make the 12th page in every issue a kind of fact page, in the case of the first few issues to recap the last 20 or so issues of the Marvel TFs. Anyway, if people are interested I can post the other issues up here over the next week or so. Feedback and comments greatly appreciated. CHeers.
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I'd be inclined not to bother with the data files, or publish them as plain text rather than a large amount of text saved as an image.

Secondly, apologies -- I tend to read this forum in blocks, since there's often a fair bit of fic. This is good stuff; very few people consider continuations of the original comics, tending to go for continuations of G2. There are a few minor typos, but overall it has a decent pace, rhythm and sharing of panel time between characters, and everyone seems in-character.

Would you mind if I included this (or a typo-corrected version) on the main website?
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HI,

Thanks for the crits. Sorry for any typos - I did this issue over a year ago and haven't looked at it much since. Feel free to post anywhere. I've been abroad for 3 weeks but now I'm back I can post some other issues here. Cheers
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Generation 1 continuation - issue 82

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Next issue of the comic - will post others in due course.
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