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Old 2005-04-10, 08:29 PM   #1
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Default Transformers Live-Action(figure) webcomic!

Prologue plus all completed chapters (and the one in progress) linked below.

Prologue -complete

-STORY ONE-

Chapter 1 -complete
part 1 part 2, part 3, part 4

Chapter 2 -complete
part 1 part 2, part 3,

Chapter 3 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3

Chapter 4 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3 part 4

Chapter 5 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3

Chapter 6 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3

Chapter 7 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3 part 4 part 5

Chapter 8 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3 part 4

Chapter 9 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3 part 4

Chapter 10 -complete
part 1 part 2 part 3

Chapter 11 -comlpete
Part 1 Part 2 Part 3

Chapter 12 -in progress
Part 1

I'll update as chapters become complete.

NOTE: All links in this thread from "tftaba.angeltowns" no longer function. Use the chapter links above, or thumbnail links shown in later threads.
 

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Old 2005-04-10, 09:29 PM   #2
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Parts read serious, parts (human-y references) flippant—not sure what kind of balance you were looking for.

Effects are great, especially the transformation blends.

Is it a battle-heavy storyline overall, or will there be more dialogue in other parts?
 
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Old 2005-04-10, 09:41 PM   #3
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That is damn cool.

Transformers > Gundam, anyday.
 


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Old 2005-04-10, 09:46 PM   #4
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I like it.

I would do that kind of thing, but it's an arse load of work (more pictures, typing, etc than the children's book). You have wonderful photoshopping skills; the lasers look great!

You have gotten me thinking about doing another children's story, though... hmm...
 
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Old 2005-04-10, 09:49 PM   #5
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Effects are great, especially the transformation blends.
Definitely. The battle damage looks very good too - some artificial charring on the carpet would have made it a little less apparently toys in the living room, but that's just icing.

The frames all look good. Everything's easy to follow, and most of the action shots are very easy to decipher. A few of the shots are a little awkward (like Megatron ordering the cease-fire), but still a good piece overall.

The dialogue could also use to be rewritten in a few spots, like Blitzwing's first line on page 15. Still, little to complain about. Nicely done.
 
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Old 2005-04-11, 12:19 AM   #6
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Thanks for the advice. I can always go back and tweak it a little, since this isn't the official launch

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not sure what kind of balance you were looking for.
It doesn't really show in the prologue, but it's supposed to be a blend of the two. It's comical, but then things can get dramatic. There are going to be a lot of dialogue scenes (especially opening up) with battle scenes in between. The first chapter is really about learning the oddball rules that go with the house. so there are some funny moments. (by the way, this is an atmosphere where everyone is aware they're toys in a house. The fact that they can shoot each other and blow themselves up within this medium...well, that will all get explained in chapter one)

The major reason for the comedy is so I can label it "satire." I put the joke in the beginning to make it clear there WOULD be jokes/comedy. The Gundams themselves have sort of established their own personalities, with those Victory Gundam guys (the blue and green ones, and the white one that got his head blown off) being a sort of cannon fodder.

I really should get back to working on it. I've got a whole lot of strips already done, but it's gotten me to realize just how many more I'll need.
 
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Old 2005-04-13, 02:39 PM   #7
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That's realy cool.

Man i like this comic

PS: Nice fotoshopping
 

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Old 2005-04-15, 05:56 PM   #8
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Hye when you gonna finish it? I realy liked it
 
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Old 2005-04-16, 03:53 AM   #9
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I'm still working on it. It's supposed to go for a couple of years, so there'll be a lot of story to tell. I'm still figuring if I'm going to post updates three times or five times a week. Three I think is too slow, but five might be hard to keep up with.

When I finally get the site built, I'll post here to let everyone know.
 
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Old 2005-05-08, 01:50 PM   #10
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nice job man. Keep it comin.
 



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Old 2005-05-08, 07:32 PM   #11
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Not bad, nice battle effects....

but, people...

Gundam >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Transformers. Always had, always will.
 
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Old 2006-11-27, 06:52 AM   #12
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Well, while this seems like grave digging, I'm actually finally adding to the thing. I put it all on hiatus some time ago while working on another project. With it completed, I'm back focusing on this story.

I've actually been piecing it together little by little the last year plus, so it's not as though the comic has been on a complete hold. But, now I can focus on it and keep the story moving.

I'll go ahead and post a few strips at a time for the while, just to get the story going. Those that viewed it the first time may wish to look again to refresh (I also upgraded--not so much updated--the photos from the prologue)

Anyway, we start!

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.000.jpg

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.001.jpg

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.002.jpg

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Old 2006-11-27, 10:53 AM   #13
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That's pretty cool man. Slight under-lying 'Red Vs Blue' style humour to it too, interested to see where it goes.
 

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Old 2006-11-29, 02:56 AM   #14
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Interesting way to describe it. I never quite thought of it that way.

The posts will probably slow down as I get closer to where I'm at right now. But, for the moment, I'll go ahead and show a bunch at a time just to get it moving:

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.005.jpg

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.006.jpg

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Old 2006-11-29, 03:06 AM   #15
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Oh noes! Terrorcons!

Munching popcorn.
 
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Old 2006-11-29, 05:54 PM   #16
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Yay! Terrorcons. Liking this a lot so far.

What's the story of Speedbreaker's "wings"? Your own modification?

Not getting what's so funny about the name either. A pun?
 
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Old 2006-11-29, 09:29 PM   #17
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I'm guessing there's already a Speedbreaker in the house

Beautiful stuff, m'man, and very, very funny. Actually a bit Ultimates - razor-sharp dialogue, stunning fight scenes, many bastards. Dunno how I missed this first time around. And I *love* the transformations.

Brilliant!
 
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Old 2006-11-30, 01:08 AM   #18
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I'm jealous. I've been playing around with doing a photo comic but my effects and photo taking skill have nothing on yours keep it up!
 

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Old 2006-11-30, 02:47 AM   #19
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Thanks, glad you all like it so far.

The "Wing" was an add-on to separate this particular fellow from the usual Blue Speedbreaker. There is an actual story around that whole name thing (Cliffy's got it, I'll go ahead and say so). It's actually the easiest way to explain why a lot of characters who share names with other toy characters will be named differently, but we'll get to all that later.

Anyway, on with the show!

http://tftaba.angeltowns.net/chapter1/ch1.008.jpg

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Old 2006-11-30, 04:27 PM   #20
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"Just some pretend thugs whose faction name was taken" :D
 
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